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Looking for someone to review your champs?

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I'm Dzanio, and I enjoy looking at different champion concepts and helping people more fully develop their awesome champion ideas.

My favorite aspects of champion design are creating synergy, balance (if I like your concept I'll do lots of numbers crunching for you :) ), and promoting ease of use.

Writing is not a strong suit of mine, I'm happy to brainstorm ideas for backstories or what have you, but dislike actually writing them; Moby the White is probably your guy for lore revisions/ideas. Oddly enough I don't like numbers as a means of feedback on champion design however, and will generally give you walls of text filled with logical arguements (the horror).

If you post a link to your concept on the forums I'll do my best to do give an in depth review of your champion. Fair warning; interesting champions will probably get more attention, and longer reviews.

EDIT: Please feel free to give feedback on my feedback; I appreciate learning how I can assist you better. I'll try to look back at your concepts periodically to see how you've responded to my posts.

EDIT 2: Please be so kind as to include the name of your champion along w/ the review request; it makes sorting out which ones I've done already sooo much easier.

STATUS EDIT: At school, reviews will come as I have free time -- I plan to check this at least twice a week.

Moby the White has begun offering his most gracious assistance to anyone finding this thread, his services, and links to his threads are included below:

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This is my main thread: Moby the White's stuff and other stuff.

Services I render:

Lorecrafting- I craft lore for other concepts

Lore reworks- I take what you have and write a new lore as close to as what you wrote as possible trying to improve it in as many areas as possible. I keep what ever areas I deem salvageable.

Lore revisions- I go through all of your mistakes and correct them.

Rated reviews- I review your entire concept based on the Lore PQWER system and give it an overall rating.

Written reviews- I review your entire concept and tell you what I think of it in prose form.

Full reviews- I combine the two previous methods when reviewing your entire concept.

Disclaimer: Currently I am only accepting Lore reviews. This is due to my hand suffering from carpal tunnel and I wish to keep the amount of typing to a minimum.

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Originally Posted by Dzanio (Post 32643438)

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b.) Yes I'm more fond of Lorecrafting than I am numbers, but oddly enough I use numbers as a means of feedback rather than walls of texts. Although recently I've started to utilize both as a way to reduce negative feedback about lack of feedback :P

Always looking for more opinions from many different people (as each person has their own ideas and sees things differently).

If you have time, take a look at Shia, The Void's Timid Doppel. Though I warn you, it is very long.

- Kat

Mine's a little brief, since I consider it to be in "alpha". Check out Bennett, the Devious Merchant and drop some feedback in the thread.

I'm expecting a lot of criticism over the mechanics, since his abilities might seem a bit overbearing at first, but that's just me. :P

yo dude...i have tons of champs...when u had some time please take a quick look on one of them if you dont mind

Greg - the Limb Remover ...

Shank - the Prisoner

Red Army - the Strongest

i have 19 more...so...when you need something..a lineart draw...a review...count with me

Hi, I just made a new champ. If you want to check it out it would be appreciated.

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=2924056

Not sure if this will work... So in any case, my thread is The cursed blade (no name yet, but i take suggestions :P)

If you could, I would enjoy some feedback on Evaren, the Acronym's call, been mulling over some details for a while now.

Thanks anyway, I apreciate what you're doing here

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Originally Posted by blackkat101 (Post 32645567)

always looking for more opinions from many different people (as each person has their own ideas and sees things differently).

If you have time, take a look at shia, the void's timid doppel. Though i warn you, it is very long.

- kat

done

You're always welcome to check out any of my champs

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...5#post32018055

I'd love it if you would review some of the projects I assisted with although they aren't mine I still wrote lore for them and feel it could benefit these posters. If you wish you may also read my other stuff hell I won't stop you. XD