Originally Posted by RiotBabagahnoosh

Vladimir moves with purpose, his long hair and robes flowing dramatically behind him as his deliberate strides carry him swiftly toward his goal.

...

"Dmitri?" Vladimir inquired, incredulous. "But, master, you are gone. I killed you."

...

The maimed figure crawled towards him, looking up with a mixture of sadness and bewilderment. The expression turned to hatred. A hand shot forward, gripping his boot. Vladimir recoiled, breaking free and stumbling backward, away from the dying child. ...

Originally Posted by hyliandanny

I really hope you get a copy editor. Here are a few that leaped out at me.



Moving on from these brazen British intrusions, the Champion Judgment is definitely an improvement in the name. The content now seems more appropriate for the title.

The content itself disappointed me because it did not offer much more than what was already described in the "Lore" section when the champion was introduced. When compared to the Xin Zhao Champion Judgment, this entry is inferior in that Xin Zhao's contained a previously-unknown character (The Bone Grinder/Squeaker) and a myriad of conflicting emotions that we could not conclude from the in-game voice, the spells, nor from the lore described in the Champions database page.

His page there paints a gladiator, a complete badass that we get an inner, appraising glimpse of when the Champion Judgment brings us to evaluates him. Both are independent and unique.

Vladimir's versions felt like they could be mere substitutions for each other.

My apologies if that sounded smug or pedantic. I don't blame you if you and your buddies are laughing; I know I'd taunt myself with "Check this f***ing nerd out, he takes our stuff way too seriously!". :P

-Danny
probably does!

Originally Posted by Gungnir

Nice Job, with this be done for all the new Champions? Or are there plans to revisit the veterans of the league?
Anyway, love the little bits of lore, something to read after a couple of matches

Originally Posted by Lightstriker

I definitely agree with you. The only thing I could think of though is that what you've described with this might actually be the point of his judgement, a sorta subversion of the FAR too common "Hidden depths remorse" thing. You are made to feel like it's going to be there at the start, the small child with the bloody dagger, the line of corpses, being forced to kill the monk who's likely the closest thing he has to the father figure, the drawn out "Why do you fight" and then... well, not so much. So the point is almost creating depth for him by reinforcing his TOTAL lack of depth: He likes killing stuff. It's what he does.

But that's just my two cents