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Name: Tive
Title: The Victim of Rage
Role: melee, fighter
Created by: Karvik.

Lore: Tive grew up in a small village known as Dae'lavis. His father told him countless stories of a powerful beast who wielded a mighty sword of flame. The beast had destroyed his father's homeland in the kingdom known as Valdaris. The beast unstoppable, killed countless souls even while outnumbered and had destroyed Valdaris. His father said the beast still lurks in the scorched land left of nothing but ashes and rubble of that which use to be the kingdom of Valdaris. All was lost, and that was when Dae'lavis was built, trying to regain what was left of the people of Valdaris. But time has passed since the destruction of the kingdom, and Tive's father was growing old and dying. Lying there he said to Tive "Join Demacia, train hard and fight for honor. Don't come back until you have slain the beast and regained the land of what Valdaris use to be." Since then, Tive Joined Demacia as a strong and noble warrior, willing to fight for his father's wishes, and set his entire life searching for the beast to defeat it and claim the mighty sword that he held.

Five years have passed since joining Demacia, Tive felt stronger than ever and was a powerful warrior with a bright fire inside of him. He set off to the lost land of ashes where the kingdom of Valdaris once ruled over, and finds nothing but scorched footprints of what he believes to be the beast, and follows them. The footprints lead him to a cave that only got warmer the deeper in. Tive finally reaches the end of the cave, there stood the figure of a man, but was no man, it was the beast with the large ancient sword his father had told him about. Tive and the beast had fought for countless hours until finally Tive, burned from head to toe, scorched armor and only a broken sword, he slayed the beast. The beast was then revealed to be a mere man. The man lying there, looked into Tive's eyes, smiled and told him "Thank you." The man turned to ashes and blew away, leaving nothing but the sword. As naive as Tive was, he picked up the blade. The blade had possessed his body with a furious hold. Tive then felt the burning pain of thousands of souls that the blade had taken. Tive was no longer a noble warrior of Demacia, he was nothing but a monster now, challenging anyone that he passes. That fire inside of him was now a feeling of rage, and was only getting stronger.

Champion design: Tive is a mindless, bloodthirsty warrior who wields an ancient 2 handed sword. His eyes glow as hot as the sun, with a murderous stare. his armor and body, scarred from battles like no other. Once a handsome sophisticated young man, now a raging being of destruction.

[Details]
Age: Young, 20-25 years old
Height: 6'1
Hair: Short and black
Facial hair: None
Eyes: White glow
Skin: Very lightly tanned with scars.
Armor: Medium-weight warrior armor with trimming, No helmet. Symmetric style.
Sword: Great sword, ancient looking with designs, trimming and heat-like glow. Symmetric style.
Sword length: 6'

[Skins]
Hellfire Tive


[Statistics]
HP: 500(+75)
HP Regen: 8(+0.5) every 5 seconds.
Fury: 100
Armor: 21(+2)
Spell Block: 15(+2)
AD: 66(+4)
AP: 0
AS: 0.64
MS: 335
Range: 125

[Abilities]

Passive, Heart of Flame
For every 1 Bonus Attack Damage Tive has, He gains 2.5 Maximum Health. (Ex. 300 bonus attack = 750 extra Health.)
Note: Bonus Attack Damage is not Attack Damage gained by leveling up, it is Attack Damage gained by buying items, using runes, or using abilities that increase Attack Damage.

Q, Burning Slash
Damage: 70/90/110/130/150(+55% AD)
Cooldown: 15/12.5/10/7.5/5 seconds
Purpose: Damage
Active: Tive's next basic attack slashes an enemy unit dealing Physical Damage to his target and 65% of the damage to 3 nearby enemies applying burn damage dealing 30% of Tive's Attack damage as Magic Damage to all enemies over 5 seconds. Activating this ability temporarily deactivates the Passive until the cooldown is refreshed.
Passive: Tive's sword is imbued with flame, applying burn damage to his basic attacks. enemies burn for 10% of Tive's Attack Damage as Magic Damage over 5 seconds.

W, Scorching Land
Range:250
Radius:350
Damage: 45/55/65/75/85(+40% AD)
Purpose: Damage, Range, Crowd Control
Tive raises his hand in flame, creating a patch of fire on the ground dealing Physical Damage every second for 4 seconds and slowing enemies by 20%. If burn is applied to an enemy, they burn for an additional 10%. Slowing effect stacks with Furious Explosion.

E, Blaze Rift
Duration: 3 seconds.
Range:420
Damage: 80/95/110/125/140 physical damage(+50% AD)
Cooldown: 17/14.5/12/9.5/7 seconds
Purpose: Damage, Range, Buff
Tive slashes his sword into the ground, widely crumbling the ground in front of him as it bursts up with flame dealing Physical Damage to all enemies in range. Tive can walk along the path of Blaze Rift, gaining 10% movement speed.

R, Furious Explosion
Fury: 100
Radius: 700
Damage: 185/285/385 Physical Damage(+55% AD)
Cooldown: 120/105/90 Seconds
Purpose: Damage, Crowd Control
Tive channels for 0.5 seconds, gaining 200 Armor and Magic Resistance for the time being, then releases a giant blast of fire around him dealing Physical Damage to all enemies in range. The blast leaves the ground crumbled and ablaze dealing 20 true damage each second for 6 seconds and slowing enemies by 20%. Slowing effect stacks with Scorching Land.

[Quotes]
Tive has a hollow, demonic voice.

Champion Selection
"Do not test me, summoner!"

Movement
"I will burn this land!"
"They will all suffer!"
"Ignite their souls!"
"Destruction is power!"

Attack
"Die!"
"Tremble in fear!"
"I will not hesitate!"

Laugh
Evil laugh

Taunt
"I will burn you from the inside out!"

Joke
"Do i not amuse you enough, summoner?!"
"I am not here to play games, summoner!"

Dance
"I refuse to make myself look like a fool!"

Death
yells in pain, fading from demonic voice to normal voice.
falls forward, turns to ash after yelling, leaving just the sword.

Abilities:
Q: "Rah!"
W: Voice shakes and lifts in anger.
E: Angry grunt.
R: "YAW!"

Champion Appearance
I know it's from a video game, and riot probably wont copy it for copy right reasons, but this is just the closest idea i have until i actually have someone help me with the artwork.

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I really like this Character you are making, I also hope they do make it as a new Champion. I'd play it All day, There arn't much flaws in your Tactics for his Abilities But For his Passive ability, Isn't hat a bit to high? Say they are at lvl 18 now, 400 attck. That's about 800 hp restored ( You didn't add how much per second or etc) so that might be a bit To OP

bump.

bump.

I dont know much about the stats portion, ive only been playing for a few weeks, but the concept itself is really great, I would definitely play him.

Let's get right into it. :3


-Passive- Very good but it'll need a cap if it's going to be balanced.

-Q- Passive is alright. Active is pretty good. Altogether good ability.

-W- Good ability. Solid gap-closer in the form of the slow.

-E- It's a good ability but it doesn't really make much sense with the rest of his kit. He already has two AoE slows that stack so this just becomes overkill. Also he has no real sustain so maybe making something that gives him that will help.

-R- Good ultimate but the range is far too low for it to be of any use (Basically like nunu's ult. Great if you're in a bush undetected but that's it.) especially since it's a channel. Two ways of fixing this would have it either be instantaneous (Remove the channel) or it would have to reposition you (A:E Pantheon's Ult or Fiddle's Ult) for it to be effective.


All in all he's a pretty good champion but there definitely are wrinkles in the design. I hope I was of some assistance. If you have time could you take a look at one of my champions? http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=2874477 You don't have to if you don't want to ^^

And on a side note nothing about your champion is even close to being Tryndamere or Shyvana or even both of them so congratulations are in order :3

bump.