You are a very talented writer and I commend you for the amount of time and effort you put into this story. The characters and surroundings are detailed and I like your style of writing.originally I thought this was going to be about survival before I was far into it. Although I found it sad that Tryndamere doesn't love his own wife and queen, he treats her like she is worthless. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter ^^
What's sad is why Ashe is upset with Kat. While I don't expect her to be happy her husband is being detained, I didn't want a bumpy road inbetween their friendship.