Originally Posted by Arr0wsmith
I really like your showcases, but it seems like your forcing the puns a bit too much. Try to make it sound more like yourself, because it almost feels like someone just handed you a script and said here act this out. Just giving some constructive feedback. Sorry if I'm too honest.
Thanks for the feedback. Some weeks are better than others, I usually script out the Showcase and then improvise a lot of the details, so I agree, sometimes it feels a little forced... mainly because I don't know what to do with segues.
I'm so awful at segues.
I'll try for more improvisational wordwork in the future, we're really digging into the directions of the showcase and how we can make them theeee greaaaateeeest evaaaaaar!
Naturally, that's for all of you. We always want to hear opinions and ideas.