Wow, ok, this is going to be long:
ignite + exhaust?
Really aggressive, generally not a good idea to pack 2 offensive summoners. You should switch one out for something else like Ghost, or Flash. I recommend flash since you seem to have huge positioning issues.
It seems like you don't know how Riven works.
You miss a ton of your abilities which indicates that you don't know the range on her abilities.
I think you landed 1 successful Q combo on renek I think. Learn to land your skill shots.
You use them in the wrong order and for the wrong purposes.
You get tower dived, you Shield away from the tower. Instead you could Stun, then shield away.
Renek pops his ulti (which heals him) and you don't use ignite immediately.
The opposing damage dealers engage to fight you and you don't drop exhaust immediately on engagement.
You don't make any significant use of your passive.
I don't think I saw you auto attack once with the passive up. You would use your abilities and run away without auto attacking at all, even after you stunned or dashed in. Don't get me wrong. Running is necessary some times, but when you're looking to trade, you need to squeeze in those auto attacks...any champ needs to do this even AP champs. Riven needs to do it even more since her charged up auto attacks are a huge portion of her damage.
You are overly aggressive when you're weak, and you're overly passive when you were strong.
At level 1 and 2, you probably had a stronger trade against Renek... especially with your ignite/exhaust. But again, you would save your Q to escape rather than use it to harass. This resulted in you charging up your passive but never auto attacking. You wouldn't use your summoners when the fight was on. You probably could have killed him easily.
But after your first death, you were behind. The first thing you did when you got back to lane? You tower dove a full HP renekton. Did you even do any calculations? Did you think you could burst him down and survive? I don't think you did. It seems like you came back pissed that you died and just tried to out right kill him without thinking anything through.
You really need to get better about this. Renek was decent in that he knew to harass you when you went to last hit. You sort of just took it rather than hitting back while his abilities are down.
There were other times that minions were at your tower getting killed and instead of last hitting them quickly with your abilities, you walk right past them and into the bushes...I don't know for what. It seemed like the most pointless thing I've ever seen. Checking for Renek? No point. What good would it do you to know that he was in that bush? You would likely have gotten killed or damaged to the point of needing to back if Renek was there waiting for you. Just stand back and get the CS that you clearly missed out on. I think that was even more of a derp moment than your attempt at tower diving.
While we're on the subject of checking bushes. Buy a fricking ward. You didn't buy a single one I don't think. Ward your river or you lane bushes so you don't have to face check. Warding is everyone's responsibility, not just the jungle and support's.
That's all I have for now.
Edit: I lied, I just saw something else
Originally Posted by Worldsworst
Honestly, I couldn't care less if I'm building wrong. Fixing that is as easy as clicking a few times. What I do care about fixing, however, is my play-style. Also, I appreciate you being nice haha but I can take criticism, that's why I made this thread in the first place.
WRONG! It's not as easy as clicking a few times. Item builds are ALWAYS situational. Certainly you may have some core items, but your item choices CHANGE how your should play your champion. Riven can be build tankier or more damaging. Depending on enemy team composition and your build, you need to adjust your playstyle in terms of aggression.
For example. You bought Ninja Tabi and stacked Doran's Blades and a vamp scepter at one point. Why? Really, why god why?
Ok, Doran's blade I can kinda understand. But why the Tabi? A bit of armor? You should have gotten a chain vest for armor and picked up Merc Treads to lower the stun. Tabi's passive ability only applies to auto attacks, renek's primary damage sources are his abilities...while mostly physical (all cept the ulti), they don't get the 10% reduction from tabi.
And a Vamp Scepter? You barely auto attacked. It did you very little good. You should have picked up regeneration.
In general, you built damage instead of sustain/survival items that you needed.
There's also the issue of gold per 10 items. If you've given up the first death in your lane and you're getting out farmed (which you were), you need to pick up some gold per 10 items. A heart of gold would have gone a long way to helping you survive and build up some more gold for future items. You'll have to play more passive though.
But yeah, if you think your build is just "click in a few buttons" then you're really not thinking about what you're building. Your build in game sort of shows.