Gewitter- Fury of the Storms

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Abilities: Quote: Passive: Thunderstruck: Gewitters spells cause a static debuff to occur on enemy champions. When static debuff reaches 4 charges he briefly gains a "Static: Charged" buff that lasts 5 secs, while this Static buff is active on Gewitter his spells are granted an additional effect. Spells consuming this buff cannot add a charge to Gewitter's Static buff. Quote: Q. Chain Lightning: 80/85/90/95/100 mana, 10/9/8/7/6 second cooldown Sends a lightning bolt that attacks up to 4 targets nearby jumping from target to target dealing 60/90/120/150/180damage +.8 ap. With Static Buff: Chain lightning grants Gewitter 20 mana for each champion he hits and 10 mana for each minion. Quote: W. Lightning Shield: 85/95/105/115/125 mana, 24/23/22/21/20 second cooldown Gewitter Casts a protective shield on an allied champion that absorbs damage 80/100/120/140/160 +.7 ap. lasting 5 seconds before shattering. If shield lasts full 5 seconds then it will heal the ally for the amount of damage absorbed. With Static Buff: Lightning shield when it shatters deals 50% of the damage it has absorbed in a nearby radius of 300 and heals nearby allies for 50% of damage absorbed as well in a nearby radius of 300. Quote: E. Electric Slide: 90/95/100/105/110 mana, 20/18/16/14/12 second cooldown Gewitter summons stormwater from his hand and hurls it out in front of him. While on this water path Gewitter increases all allied movement speed by 10/12/15/18/20%. Enemies caught in this line are slowed by 25% for 5 secs and are dealt 10/15/20/25/30 damage per sec while in the area of Electric Slide's animation. With Static Buff: Enemies caught in Water Slide are Paralyzed for 5 secs decreasing their speed by 50% instead of 25% and are dealt an additional 10 damage per second. Quote: R. Thunderstorm: 100/120/140 mana, 100/90/80 second cooldown Gewitter summons a massive Thunderstorm at target location. Upon being summoned the thunderstorm globally reduces all sight to 500 range (like nocturnes ult). those caught at the epicenter of the storm are silenced for 3 seconds and damaged every 2 seconds by lightning sparks for 100/200/300 magic damage +.5/.6/.7 ap lightning does not strike the same enemy twice in a row it will first choose a new target prior to striking the same one again if no new target exists lightning will strike the same target twice. With Static Buff: Thunderstorm's Damage is increased to 200/400/600 + .8/.9/1.0 ap lasts for 6 secs

updated with mana and cooldowns added also grammer and syntax changes were made to some of the lore as well. Still working on ult and E

haven't done much with this lately thought id take another look

i like this idea. all the name for the skills are intresting along with the lore.

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Hey Moby.

The lore is pretty bomb, I gotta say.

The passive is also pretty good, I like additional effects to abilities every 4th one, it adds more variety to the champion's combos and more depth to their play style.

Q: My only problem with this is that the starting base damage is too high, especially counting the fact that this jumps between 4 enemies. Almost all AP caster abilities start with 60 points of damage. The ratio is also fairly high, but I suppose that can be allowed since his ultimate is his only other damaging spell. If you start it at 60 and up it by 45 or 50, it would be more balanced. The mana costs get high in later levels, considering that many people may upgrade this first, and its his only normal form of damage output.

W: This is a very powerful shield, considering it also heals the champion. Is the heal only applied if the shield lasts the entire 5 seconds? Because then, that would not be so powerful, but would instead be an awesome way of absorbing poke, especially in lane. If not, then you may want to lower the AP ratio, considering that, in essence, the shield is doubled by the heal. In 5 seconds, in a fight, it is bound to be destroyed, so the ally would be healed for 180 (+70% AP). Most heals only stack off of 50% AP or something around there, and Janna's shield only stacks off of 80% AP. The base shield, however, is appropriately low for a dual shield/heal combo. The mana cost is very, very high, but maybe that's ok for a spell of this power.

E: The utility on this spell isn't that great for being a pure utility spell. Movement speed buffs and slows on pure utility spells are usually a bit higher. Galio has a 20/28/36/44/52% movement speed buff for allies on his Wind Gusty Thing Spell as well as damage, and its on a 12 second cooldown. I believe the damage to be more significant than a 25% slow. The mana cost is also high for a spell with no hard cc or damage. I realize you are still working on this skill, so I'm not judging at all. Anyway, almost everything on this forum is a work in progress.

R: The global vision reduction is pretty cool, I'm always scared out of my pants when there is an enemy Nocture (or Teemo, but that's for a different reason). But I have a few questions. Enemies in the epicenter are silenced for a good while, but they also take damage, right? Maybe I'm being stupid, but you didn't specifically say it, so I'm not sure. Besides that, is the damage you mention the total damage from the sparks, if the enemies stay in the storm the entire time? Because, if not, 500/550/600 (+50/60/70%) is a ton of damage. Even if it is the total damage, that is still a ton. I know you are still working on this skill, but reduce the damage, and make it increase more per level. The reason people upgrade ultimates is because they improve a ton with levels, more than other abilities.

Overall, the concept is pretty good. I especially like the lore. Good job.

made a bunch of changes thanks to osprii

Alright. The changes look good, especially to the shield, which is a really cool idea with the heal/ damage per absorbed damage. The ultimate is also much clearer. Good job. You definitely get a thumbs up on this one.