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Champion Name: Zarion, the Shade of Corruption Tags: Mage, ranged Resource: Mana Champion Information Name: Zarion Vonkrone Age: Unknown Gender: Male Race: Human (shadow of former self) Affiliation: None Origin: Unknown Relative(s): Ragner Vonkrone (brother), Slade Vonkrone (brother) Theme: Black, Dark Blue, Ashen Weapon: Any source of shadows or shade

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Passive: Hungering Fiend - Whenever Zarion kills an enemy champion, he recovers 30% of his health and mana. Hungering Fiend has a 18/16/14/12 second cool down. Q: Duskshift - Zarion steals vital energies from his target, simultaneously damaging the enemy and recovering his health and mana. Zarion steals power from his target, dealing 80/120/160/210/260 (+0.65) magic damage and recovering his health and mana for 10/20/30/40/50 (+0.20) Cost: 70/80/90/100/110 Mana Range: 625 Cool Down: 12.5/12/10.5/10/9.5 W: Shadowbind - Zarion summons a floating ball of shadow in a targeted area. After a second delay the ball will explode spreading shadowy tendrils to enemy units nearby, dealing damage and rooting them. If the ball is engaged by a single enemy champion while in delay it will not explode, but dealing damage and immobilizing the single champion instead. Zarion summons a floating ball of shadow in a targeted area. After a second delay the ball explodes spreading tendrils, dealing 75/125/170/225/260 (+0.6) magic damage and immobilizing them for 2 seconds. If hit by a moving enemy champion the ball will not explode, but dealing 80/130/180/230/270 (+0.6) magic damage and immobilizing the enemy champion for 2.5 seconds. Cost: 60 Range: 900 Cool Down: 12 E: Dark Flight - Zarion uses the shadows to form wings and take limited flight, increasing his movement speed. Passive: Zarion can ignore unit collisions with minions and champions. Active: Zarion takes flight, gaining 15% movement speed for 4 seconds. Cost: 60/70/80/90/100 Cool Down: 15.5/13.5/11.5/9.5/8 R: Baneful Grasp - Zarion uses one of his past chaotic magics sending out nether coils and damaging the champions in front of him. Champions nearby are afflicted by Black Touch damaging them each second, if the champions die while afflicted they will explode and cause devastating damage to enemy allies nearby. Zarion sends out nether coils dealing 50/70/90 (+0.5) magic damage and afflicting enemies with Black Touch, dealing 150/280/340 (+0.8) magic damage over 4 seconds. If enemy champions die during this effect it will explode, dealing 150 (+25) true damage to surrounding enemies. . Cost: 100/150/200 Range: 780 Cool Down: 200/160/110

• "None can escape the shadows of despair!"

• "You dare command me!"

• "None shall survive!"

• "My power hungers!"

• "Bask in my presence."

• "Darkness falls..."

• "As it should be..."

• "Cower within the shadows!"

• "Perish!"

• "Is this it?"

• "Feeling good? Come then!"

• "Your shade should be of use. Now die!"

• "I don't joke around..."

• "You think I'm a joke?"

• "Good luck with the shadows tonight summoner, Hahahaha..."

• "Come over here!"

• "Hahahaha!"

• 1st Update: Abilities reworked.

• 2nd Update: Added champion quotes.

• 3rd Update: Fixed Errors.

• 4th Update: Passive and R reworked.

• 5th Update: Baneful Grasp is no longer a pull, but damage overtime.

• 6th Update: Typos and Grammar.

Passive- That is bit OP. All he has to do is really play smart and you can't get him out of lane. Maybe a certain number of health like 30 per kill, or something like that.

Q-Nice skill, deals a lot of damage. hate to be a veigar and get hit by that. The CD is really low, in my opinion it should be higher, or have the mana cost higher.

W- Great skill, with a slightly low CD but would work.

E- Good skill, good to get in range of an enemy and burst them, then run.

R- Nice skill, good to pull enemies under a turret or kill retreating enemies.

Overall: I like tis champ. Would be cool to see in game

If you have the time, could you review one of my champion concepts?
Devor, The Dark Rider

Passive seems like too much health and mana maybe scale it with levels. R seems OP too me as well with the 1.1 scaling, and the explosion base damage seems too high as well.

UPDATES - Abilities have been reworked, Added champion quotes.

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First of all this is a great champ. I love the image, the abilities, the whole concept. The quotes are a little weak though you might need to work on that. As for the abilities:
P:A great concept but a little OP. You might consider lowing the percentage and making it over time.
Q:A fine ability but I would recommend making the heal a little greater.
W:A great ability, no complaints there.
E: The concept is fine but, 15 movement is nothing. I suggest you either increase the flat amount of make it 15%.
R:Also a great ability but, I think that it should change from if they die while under its effects to if they die from it, as to avoid making it OP.

Just my thoughts, I hope you find them useful. Also I would appreciate if you could take a look at my champ and tell me what you think:http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/...ghlight=cambio

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Alright...Let's get right into it.

Passive : Good idea but kinda OP. Maybe 25% or 30%

Q : Nice ability. Good heal good damage. Quick little thing though, it doesn't say what it's scales off of but I'm going to assume it scales off of AP.

W : Very nice skill. Solid initiate and damage.

E : Cool ability. Not much to be said about a steroid.

R : Very nice ability on paper. The aftereffect to killed champs is very nice as well. Unfortunately I can't say anything about the damage because you may have made an error with it seeing as it levels 5 times. Ultimates can only level 3 times.


All in all. Pretty cool concept just need to work on the passive and ultimate. If you have time would you be able to review one of my champions? http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/....php?t=2874477 ^^

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