I was anticipating chapter two for like a week, how wonderful it was to see the update today. =)

It's a nice story so far, and I'm glad to see that it's working itself out to be a longer story. Mysterious forces are at work, and love is in the air. I enjoy Riven's internal dialogue, it brings to light her confusion and frustration. While I agree with Pig Magus on shipping Riven and Irelia, this pair also seems to work out nicely. For a bit I thought the doctor was Shen, then... oh wait he's a summoner.

My only concern is that it's a really serious tone, though I feel I can't nitpick that as much because my writing does it too. Aside from that bit of teasing silliness at the end of the chapter anyway (meanie!) =P

Perhaps Lux can help break the tension - she'd definitely be the one to sling about some jokes to lighten the mood. Or you know have fun with the remaining cast, like Demacian karaoke or some woeful deception from Leblanc, or even small random events like Anivia having an eye out for Swain, Mundo's being horribly awkward, or other such nonsense.

I am curious though on how Riven would handle Ionians, since she invaded and all...

I eagerly await the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.

Gj love the new chapter.

I love your writing style, this fic is great already~

Btw I LOLed at Riven in the end of chapter 2. :3

Moar! <(>o<)>

Yikes! There's a lot more action on these forums now. But you know what'll help keep me on the first page for a bit?

Chapter 3.

Direct link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7599936/3/Guiding_Light

Chapter 3 Spoiler Summary:

I actually made this chapter without including any other champions than Lux and Riven. Didn't even realize it. Cool.
Next one will be interesting though. It'll include a certain Ionian that people may or may not be hoping for... (and who barely missed the cut for this chapter, incidentally).

Love triangle?! <(OoO)>

...also...

MOAR! <(>o<)>

BUmp