I have reviewed all champions posted up to this point (except Veral42's few other champs) Keep the concepts coming guys. The feedback for my champs has also been most helpful, thank you.

And Veral42, I'm very tired and it's late, I promise I will review your other champs first when I log in tomorrow.

Surely more of you are willing to have me look at your champion concepts... I'm not that repugnant am I? *sniffs armpit*

Of course we have more ideas Azmare. I posted on Osma some of my ideas for the anti-magic rework.Your critique on Quirk was very helpful, and I wanted you to have a look at Razmae- I finished him earlier today.

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/showthread.php?t=1557858

I posted a reply to Jeryk.

http://na.leagueoflegends.com/board/showthread.php?t=1494201&page=5

Azmare, I'm curious about Osma, when do you think you'll complete it?

Hello Azmare,

I reviewed Raiken, and in case you don't find what I wrote on Raiken's thread, I'm reposting what I wrote here. Also I do not have a champion I want you to review yet, so let's just say you owe me one for now, okay?


Your character is very interesting, but a few suggestions seem necessary,

1) Without knowing Raiken's stats, his abilities will be harder to balance, so please keep that in mind.
2) The passive is perfect, and very unique, please don't change it, ever.
3) "Lightning Dash" has a very small range, 250, is barely enough to chase, or really hit any enemy, considering that Raiken is a melee champion. You're only real hope is if you have your sword sheathed, at the time.
4) "Move as Shadow" doesn't really make sense to me. Since he tumbles towards your cursor, you can't target an enemy, making his damage, and knock-up useless.
5) I really liked "Strike from Void", as it would help kill off those amazingly annoying tanks, so no changes there.
6) Major questions about "One Strike, Two Cuts" are, how much is it's base mana cost? Is there any cooldown?
7) When will you be posting up the lore, and the actual stats?

All in all this was very interesting to read, and I will be looking at this kind of frequently. Good Luck with future endeavors!

I have now reviewed all champions up to this point.

To address some concerns...

Shazboticus, I'll be honest, I made Osma months ago when I first discovered LoL's forums and still didn't know much of the game. Since he requires a complete rework, I'm working on balancing my other four champions first, making him essentially my last priority. I WILL fix him up soon though, it's just a matter of when I get to it.

FelixKam, about Raiken, I'll post it on his thread so anyone with the same concerns can see it there before posting.

I'm bumping myself to bring out more of your champs. Don't be afraid, I don't bite often... *er* hard... *er* who am I fooling? I bite.

Fair enough, figured I'd ask. I saw Raiken...interesting. Love the theme but not sure about some of the skills, will likely comment on later.