Ok, I'm sorry but...this is actually kind of funny, considering how many problems there are.
well, for starters, the introduction isn't really as much of an intro as it is a character description. The character you've described is horribly correspondent to that of a mary-sue, mostly since you haven't described at all what she's like and more what she can do, which are not the same thing. What are her hobbies/interests? As far as I can tell, she's an emotionless robot set on a legendary quest to do absolutely, nothing. I can vaguely understand that you're trying to kinda work off of the personality of Shen, but how much is there to actually work off of? No offense, Riot, but I wouldn't call Shen the ideal blueprint for an astounding character.
Second, the intro gives the reader nothing as to what kind of story this will be, and overall makes it sound more boring than exciting. What kind of genre is it going to be? Horror? Comedy? Action? Romance? The tone of voice for this little spiel is so bland, it sounds more along the lines of a history textbook than an exciting story.