So I accidently made another thread with chapter two I am going to repost it here.

Not bad!

I love Lee Sin. I'm curious as to why you chose to pair these two up. Do you have a reason in mind? Or would it spoil the story if you told me? :P

I'm glad you spaced out Chapter 2 to make it easier to read. I hope you do the same for Chapter 1. It's nigh undecipherable as it is. ^^;

On a side note, I happen to know for a fact that Sejauni's boar is named Kevin Tuggles. It's not a well-known fact, however, so I guess you can call him whatever you want. :P

Looking forward to more.

@ Ceru. She has in game chat thing of calling her boar Bristle or something of that nature if I remember correctly.

Augh...WoT too OP...hurts eyes...plz fix...

Besides that, GJ! I'm likin' it...although the dialogue is borken.

lol i investigated alot into that and i found that due to some sort of contest that im not really sure was it seems to be a concensus that the boars name is Kevin Tuggles. ill decide whether or not to change it by my next chapter

I wouldn't take it too seriously. Just keep it as Bristle. :P

Edit: Chapter 1 looks much better!

its great i love it. Although some immaturity does shine through in some parts. Its still a great read. I look forward to the next events. You should worry a little more on word choice. I am still very impressed with it.

This is great, but now I really want the story of Ezreal dating half the female champions.