Also wondering if your actually intending for leona and lux to fall in love, since the comments from nidalee, ahri, and leblanc.

Chapter 11 is finished at last! In fact, it was so long that I had to split it between two posts.

Either way, I hope you'll enjoy the final confrontation between Leona and Plagueis. It may not go down quite how you would expect.

Grr, why does Cerubois have to take all the fanfic customers...?

Y u guys no comment?

Well, I may not be an expert in fanfiction, lore or writing, but I really liked it! The story was really good, enough to keep me reading because I wanted to, and not because I had to finish it.

+1 for random lesbians moments, because Ahri is way too sexy to not use her for fanservice!

Really cool fights, especially Shyvana's and Jarvan's. And talking about Jarvan, I liked how you made it sound like a little royal ass*hole at the beginning, and suddenly turned him into a hero, sacrificing his life for Lux and risking it just to take Leona to a safe place.

Can't wait for the last chapter, and to see Swain's plan, LeBlanc's favor (if Lux returns, which I think will happen, you just don't take away the main character's best friend/lesbian crush without a proper ending) and Pantheon's reaction. Cuz, I'm pretty sure everyone wants some more Mantheon, maybe him yelling at Leona that all those people had to make those sacrifices just because she wasn't focused and she didn't know her limits.

And a free bump for you!
Let's see if the Parrot ever shows up.

Shameless bump. Still working on Chapter 12.