FINALLY movement in this story. Gawshdarnnabbit. Alright, so I'm gonna just burn my fingers by editing the rest of this story as quickly and furiously as possible. Then I'll work on War Drums, and THEN I've got another surprise that will probably have to wait till early next year to be started. And by that, I mean I won't have the information I need for it until early...next...year. SO! expect quick updates, hopefully. It's a lot of work because I practically have to rewrite most of the story, but the chapter 4 update took me the better part of a couple of hours. I won't update Fanfiction.net until I finish because it is such a pain in the arse to edit already published material, so I'll just do it all in one fell swoop for FF again.
Chapter 4 has been edited, expect more in a couple days or possibly less.
Link to the page Chapter 4 is on.