Seems a little over complicated, I don't think he'd be popular because the abilities' effects constantly change. The new ult concept does a ton of damage, and provides random cc, personally don't like it.

Both ults provide too much cc for the base damage and scaling, although the second one is worse about this.

Generally has really long cds and high mana costs which would make laning difficult. Maybe nerf the cc on his q or w, and make it a bit more spammable so he has some form of harrass in lane. Otherwise he'll get zoned hard.

Well, that was my first review in certainly a long time.

Anymore guys?

This champ is neat and certainly would have a high skill cap, which I like. Also its a Void champion and as a big fan of H.P Lovecraft I love Void champions. I also like that the lore references another champion in the league, I'm a big fan of that as it helps make the champions feel connected to each other. I mean all the time they spend in the Institute of War they have to bump into each other once in a while. This sounds like a great champion that I'd be very interested in seeing in the game, even if I probably aren't good enough at LoL to use him.

I'd really really appreciate if you or anyone else interested in this Void champion could take a look and comment on / review my Void champion. Its just an initial concept but I"m hoping to develop it with the help of this community and people who are better at numbers than me, who just guesses.

Occulus - Eye of the Void

I'll take a look at it after I'm done with my Finals HW. Kinda hectic right now

I really like when people find inventive ways to include current champs in with their own brings the champions to life. Your league judgement was fun. only thing is im having a hard time imagining his weapon. got any thing you could reference to help visualize it?

He'll be having a void portal in the air right next to his left shoulder and his attack animation will be,
Putting his hand into the portal and then grabbing a clump of what looks like 0 and 1s and then hurling it toward the target. A crit will make the clump explode upon contact.

Quite like your Q and W.

On his E, can he cancel the channel on his own? If not, he's essentially snared himself for 2 seconds. That could be dangerous.

On the R, I actually think the Second R (one without the sleep) sounds more interesting and fun.
- Does it summon the full amount of portals at one time durring the effect, or do they slowly pop up?
- Now you say the portals move around after a bit, can they move only on the field, or can they wander off?
- Personally, I would like it if it summoned the full amount of portals at once randomly on the field. After which, instead of having them move around, to keep with the instability of the Void power, instead of having them move, they disappear and keep reappearing throughout the duration of the Ultimate. Each time they reappear, their location is random again. Portals could last for say 1 second. This would show that he has the power to contain the Void portals to a specific area, but not so much power over them that he cannot place them exactly or stably keep that many open at once.

I also enjoyed the lore. I like how you used Kassadin to link him to the League. Recently only did that myself with my champion, Shia, The Void's Timid Doppel. If you have time, wouldn't mind giving me your thoughts on her.

Keep up the good work.



- Kat



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Only thing I'd like to add, is that your format could use with a little organizing. Had to reread a couple things just to understand what was where. All the information is there, just tidy it up a bit so it's easier on the eyes.