What Mugen said. >:c
Your writing skills are to be admired though Pepsi; Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling.
You add such an enjoyable amount to details too, it gives a great visual presence to your story.
CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGERS!!
Edit: By the way, do you mind if I slightly publicize your story?
Such as sharing the link to this thread to other communities and such?
Meaning I would appreciate it so much(: Thanks you guys for all the support ^_^" I cant thank you enough <3