Ah, now this is much better. I still have a few technical qualms (Mostly the comma usage lending itself to a few splices) but the overall quality of this bio is much better than the last revision. Katarina's character is much clearer here, and you've done some seriously good work clarifying her mission and making it seem more like something she would do.
I have to say what impresses me most, though, is your ability to take the community's concerns into account and make edits based off the feedback. So, bravo on that front. It's always good to see game companies really communicating with their fans about the lore of their world.
+1 and have a good day, you've earned it.