As it happens, I don't think I touched on what happens either. Yes, the one who is tagged out does regenerate health. As for how you can tell, her HP bar will have two layers; the standard green bar and a secondary yellow bar behind it. The yellow bar indicates the health of the tagged persona, but you won't be able to see it with a full green bar.

I very much like your idea of allowing the tagged persona to benefit from lifesteal. I'm worried this might make her overpowered, but you seem like you have a good grasp on balance. If this can work, by all means let me know.

I'm not sure about this one. I was initially thinking full health, due to her actual health being incredibly low. I'd have to get a second opinion on that one though.

I can't say i'm all that good with numbers when it comes to making skills. I get much more invested in my aesthetics and lore. I like to try and create different kinds of playstyles, preferably something that LoL doesn't quite have yet, but that tends to result in balance issues. Glad to see i've done a good job on this one.

If only we had a way to create our champions in some sort of server and give them a test run on the Fields of Justice. It'd be a godsend in helping me figure out the proper ranges.

Buddy banter was something I wanted to see in LoL in some form or another for quite a while. I don't think we have someone on the actual roster that uses it aside from Pulsefire Ezreal. I decided that Schizophrenia was a great place to make that happen, and Atel just came out perfectly in that regard.

Thanks for checking out my work, and i'll get to writing some reviews for ya. I've got a bit more on my plate today than i've had in a very long time, so i'll be getting to work shortly.

If I could ever voice a champion, it would be something like this. I find this hilarious! LOL

I do sincerely hope that this gets noticed and seriously considered for a champion idea. How the hell do you guys come up with this stuff!? Ahhhh

*Bump Bump Bump*

Ok so the concept as a whole is great. The idea of having two champs in one has always been an idea bounced around but you gave it a unique spin in that it is just a mental split. I feel it could get confusing though for the moves Tag Out! and Schizofriends if they look the same as if the persona were on the field making it hard to determine who is targetable. So a suggestion would be a shadowy version of the other person appears and doesnt solidify until the actual switch is made. Now onto the individual abilities.
Passive- great idea to keep the dual persona up and the 50% health works well with it but i think a 30 second zilean ult might be a little overpowered. maybe have the last cooldown be a bit higher.
Q- The writing was a bit confusing but from what i understand you empower your next two auto attacks the first adding damage and the second giving either a rengar out of the bush type jump or the shield with lifesteal. this is pretty good to help define one as a duelist and one as a chaser and works well. the name could use a little work though.
W- the duration reset when you switch between the two is a little strong i might only do it for half the original duration since no one would like a AS or MS slow on an assassin that lasts 6 seconds.so it would be the original 3 seconds and then add 1.5 if you do decide to switch.
E- The line idea is good but im wondering if the line is created or if it is attached to the champion. I think either way the damage could go up for Atel just to make dueling him in the line even worse of an idea like trying to duel rumble on his ult.
R- I love the name and the fact that there isnt just one way to switch between the two. I do think that the duration is a little long but other than that it seems like a great ability.

I imagined that an aura or particle explosion would suffice to show which character is which when using Tag Out!, but I do like the shadowy version idea for the characters themselves. As for Schizofriends, if the main persona uses it on an enemy, the other persona will piggy-back onto an enemy and stab away.

You may be right. 40 seconds work?

I could be wrong, but "red smile" is another term for slashing someone's throat. Being an assassin, I thought a combat term with "smile" in it was a perfect fit for someone who borders the line between cheery and homicidal.

Also a pretty good idea.

The line is not attached to Atel. As for damage, the ability is not about using damage, but about the CC. Bush-checking, ambushing, and cutting off escape routes. Also, taking power out of an ability allows me to put it in somewhere else.

If it was slightly above the norm before, I think the nerfs on her passive and W should be enough to retain balance if left as is.

I'm a bad reviewer but a good bumper. I really have interest in this champion so I hope you get more deep reviews so you can carry this project further ^_^

This is a fantastic champion, or should I say double champion idea. We need more champions with humor and what better way then a champion with double personality. Its fantastic. The moves are quite interesting. I would like to hopefully see them in action.

[P]:I imagine this being somewhat similar to Anivia's egg form. Will return to this after I look at the other skills.

[Q]:So this is a 2 part basic attack amplifier? Interesting. I like this idea. On Leta's 2nd strike teleporting her to her target confuses me, Isn't she melee? Teleporting when your already right in front of them seems, for the lack of a better word, senseless. =/

[W]: 2 things. They share a body so when you say one of them appears at target location are they like a spirit or something? Secondly when reactivated does the player switch to the 'Other's spirit' location (the target location) or does the player stay in the same place? Either way I like the debuffs for both. Iffy on them refreshing half the duration. Just kinda increases the amount of text the player will have to read.

E: Falling Stars (Atel) - Atel amasses magical shuriken in a line, dealing 25/40/55/70/85(+0.6AD) physical damage to targets within the line every second. The line lasts three seconds. Enemies hit are revealed for 2 seconds on the first attack, 4 on the second, and 6 on the third.

[E]:Ok on Atel's it 'throws' 3 shurikens? It just isn't plural so it confused me for a sec. Interesting idea. Definitely something I'd like to see.

On Leta's I feel like a slow would be on a skill using caltrops but that might put too much cc on an ability. Possibly add a low damage DoT every .5s they are on the caltrops before it explodes. Other than that gives enough for counter play and not a huge stun so good deal.

[R]: Oh man this ultimate pushes her/them over the top in my opinion. Too, too strong. Nothing the other team can do to stop Leta from ripping into a foe with such high damage. She could destroy a team while Atel sit under a turret looking at what she is going to buy next. Procs [W] debuffs as well? This ability is way overpowered.

Overall: Highly complex champion with some good ideas. Couple concerns around if her passive being on cooldown and still being able to use her [W] and [R]. The combination of [W] and [R] is scary to say the least, a bit much I must say. (I'm not innocent in creating similar champions) but I feel maybe breaking up the definitions instead of a paragraph of information all jumbled together could help clear some things up. I do like the idea and theme of her but her kit seems a bit too strong for me even with the reduced max health, See [R] making the spirit untargetable kind of nulls this.

The 2nd attack more or less functions like Katarina's Shunpo. In other words, Leta's second attack is ranged and teleports her to the enemy. It only works on the 2nd attack, so you'll need to use a melee attack in order to unlock it.


Yeah, the inactive persona manifests as a spirit. And yes, the player switches positions when they reactivate this ability. You use this ability as Atel, she will disappear and the player will switch over to Leta, in both control and position.

Perhaps, though it is one of two crucial pieces of information touched on near the end. I'm not sure it needs to be eliminated if the other bit about the passive requires mention.


I assumed shuriken was similar to kunai or ninja in terms of how the plural is used. On other note, I intended for the visual to include 7-11 tiny shuriken flying about. The amount of visual shuriken will have no impact on the mechanical aspect of the ability.

I was focused more on the explosive aspect than the caltrops. Perhaps bombs would be more fitting for the skill alone, but pairing shuriken and bombs didn't really make sense to me.


I think you're overestimating the impact of the ability. Atel is meant to be a duelist in one half and a burst AD assassin on the other. In order for her to use Leta to attack an enemy, she would have to remain as Atel, which has much weaker damage output in favor of survivability. So yes, Atel's Schizofriends would be quite powerful in terms of sheer damage, but if the enemy goes after Atel with equally threatening DPS, the enemy can burst down Atel rather quickly and nullify most of the ultimate...

Actually, this does bring up something important. If the main persona dies while Schizofriends is active, neither the damage nor the invulnerability should continue. I was also going to bring up something about Schizofriends' damage being significantly weaker without other abilities triggering, but a 150% damage might still be too high.

That said, I still don't think the W thing is any stronger than manually aiming it at the enemy. To clarify, W's effect doesn't automatically trigger on R. You still have to cast W to utilize the effect.


Thanks for your review, i'll be making some changes shortly.

Thou shalt be bumped!

Ult is way overpowered