reason i changed it is for the same tense rule. if you start telling a storying using the past tense you should typically keep it past tense unless somehow you make it catch up to present tense. plus within a sentence if i say something like the following:
Tracy and I are going to the movies and we are watching it while eating popcorn.
the sentence remains in the same tense
but if i said:
Tracy and I are going to the movies and we are watches it while eats popcorn
none of what i said makes sense...in fact i had a very hard time trying to come up with a sentence that fit this.
some instances i changes stuff just to sound better. I utilized the word that to separate the two members. I am far from perfect at english but these are minor changes that i thought you could make in order to improve your lore.
overall i think the concept is unique like i said. I was kind of upset that the gold mechanic didn't penalize you. With the new talent trees i could see a champion that utilizes the pickpocket quite well here
Well i did make the change to the 'E' skill (i'm not sure if you caught it) but i also had a brainstorm and wanted to not make it a multicast but make it flow with his passive i think you for your assistance in helping me with my lore and i will do better with the next champion idea i come up with