Okay, here's my approach to it.

Notice how I've also moved a few lines on his abilities.

Hope you like it ))

bump!

((Hrm, now stumped by the conundrum of probably needing a re-write on such things as appearance and abilities, if dropping the armor. Just something to embrace the whole mutation theme, step away from any kind of technology involved.))

((Ah, that'd be great if you'd be willing to do so. This seems like a very nice service that you offer, and I'm sure that a lot of OC-crafters will come to appreciate your talent.))

"If plausible, even..." Tiberius rasped, an armored fist making to tap at where his chin would have been, had his helmet's visor not stopped hi, "I would...be freed of this...walking prison. Let the world...behold what I have become..."

((omg. Its so...






Badass! This is cool.))

((Well here is that champion concept I was telling you about. There is no lore now but the idea is that it hates humans because it developed an intelligence the believes the humans wiped out it's creators which are an ancient extinct race.))