I like her, although with the kit and scaling she has it'd be more likely that she'd be a powerful duelist than a tank. She lacks CC to peel off of her teammates, but she does have a lot of nice defensive auras. She might be on the powerful side due to scaling so much with AD, and granting herself and those around her so much gold in free stats.

She is much more Fighter/Support than Tank/Support. Different style. She'd be better suited chilling top, then dominating in teamfights.

She does give quite a hefty bonus to nearby teammates at max level, but significantly less than some other champs get by themselves (25% AD steroid? Jesus, Zed.). In addition, I don't think her abilities scale too extremely off of AD. 60% AD scaling is standard for those kinds of dashes, and 80% total AD scaling for an autoattack modifier isn't unheard of (Might tone that down to 60% max, though, given how scary it's 40% AD shredding is.)

I'll give you a more in-depth description of what I think about her kit and how it works, and a few of the things that might cause problems

This seems fine really. I like it a lot, it's a simple passive that just makes everyone more durable, including Jenara herself.

This is my favorite ability of hers, a charge that lets her punch her way into the front lines, or into the back of an enemy team. I also love how it boosts nearby allies to help them keep pace with her. If I could change anything on it, it would be to remove the attack speed on it and cut the buff's duration down to something around 2 seconds, but drastically increase the movement speed bonus to her allies to around 40/45/50/55/60%. This would really give her a feeling of being able to pound through the enemy team and lead a charge with her fellow melee. If you want to keep the attack speed giving it to Jenara herself at the end of the charge would be awesome as well, or maybe give her another aura once she's stopped charging to increase the AS of allies nearby.

The reason why I'm personally hesitant on the AS being part of the charge is that it reads a little strangely. In a lot of situations you might want to position to charge through an allied carry or most of your team, instead of just leading the fight into the center of the fray, which is what I think you're trying to capture here.

Either way this ability is awesome, and I'd love to see it in play some day.

This ability is where I see her becoming a force to be reckoned with in top lane. It's probably a little too powerful to be honest. At level 5 this ability would have a 50% up time, and effectively reduce the target's damage by 40% every 4 seconds for 4 seconds.

That said I do like the idea of smashing the enemy's weapon. Maybe you could limit it to physical damage or damage of basic attacks to help balance it out more.

This ability is a little numbers heavy to me, and I think that that amount it shields for should probably be based on Jenara's own health rather than the current health of others, I think it'd go well with her ult as well, powering up her shield and tenacity as her health drops. Other than that I think this ability is fine, the clutch saves it could cause would be awesome.

Another ability that seems fine as is. I'm assuming that you mean she gains 10/15/20 - 20/30/40 Tenacity after the initial CC break on activation. It's like her resolve and will strengthen as her situation becomes more dire.

Overall a fun looking champion that I'd like to see in game.

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Passive is pretty much an armor version of Soraka's. While it fits, it's kind of boring.

Q: Good initiate skill for you and your team. Fits well.

W: Powerful debuff, although limited to champions that actually attack. This means that you're almost always going to have to go for physical dps champions and limits the utility of this skill vastly.

E: nice AoE shield scaling with health. Fits.

R: So this is pretty much Olaf's ult with a passive aura. Meh. Tanky steroid seems misplaced and you're not going to do much with the cc immunity since you don't do much damage and offer no control.


Overall you're lacking in focus on a role. You don't have a lot of damage, give this champ an initiate but too many buffs and you have 0 hard crowd control. This is too mixed between tanky support, someone like Taric, and someone like Lee Sin. You need to hone in on one type. Use Alistar and Leona as good examples for Tanky Support, and Taric for a good example of full Support as Melee. If you want her to do more damage, you need to give her more damage!

edit: looking back I probably screwed up some things here...

She's much more of a top lane fighter who happens to have great teamfight potential than a true support like Alistar or Leona, which is what I was aiming for. A buffer rather than a debuffer. Though, her W would make for a potent support ability to handicap the enemy carry for a time, leaving your carry to finish them off, and her Q and E are by themselves potent support abilities.

She's supposed to be built with a decent chunk of attack damage on her. While she only has two damaging abilities, she makes a great off-tank, and due to her passive aura effects she could also make a good pure tank due to her perpetual soft-taunt, I.E. while she's around, the rest of her team is that much scarier, so she's a tank that opponents will actually want to focus down, which makes them waste time.

She does have a total lack of cc, but I think the rest of her kit makes up for it.

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I like her shes a good champion.
all abilities are great and i really like them

i have a champion of my own can you look at him and tell if i need to change something
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