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I'm Dzanio, and I enjoy looking at different champion concepts and helping people more fully develop their awesome champion ideas. My favorite aspects of champion design are creating synergy, balance (if I like your concept I'll do lots of numbers crunching for you  ), and promoting ease of use.Writing is not a strong suit of mine, I'm happy to brainstorm ideas for backstories or what have you, but dislike actually writing them; Moby the White is probably your guy for lore revisions/ideas. Oddly enough I don't like numbers as a means of feedback on champion design however, and will generally give you walls of text filled with logical arguements (the horror). If you post a link to your concept on the forums I'll do my best to do give an in depth review of your champion. Fair warning; interesting champions will probably get more attention, and longer reviews. EDIT: Please feel free to give feedback on my feedback; I appreciate learning how I can assist you better. I'll try to look back at your concepts periodically to see how you've responded to my posts. EDIT 2: Please be so kind as to include the name of your champion along w/ the review request; it makes sorting out which ones I've done already sooo much easier. STATUS EDIT: At school, reviews will come as I have free time -- I plan to check this at least twice a week. |
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This is my main thread: Moby the White's stuff and other stuff. Services I render: Lorecrafting- I craft lore for other concepts Lore reworks- I take what you have and write a new lore as close to as what you wrote as possible trying to improve it in as many areas as possible. I keep what ever areas I deem salvageable. Lore revisions- I go through all of your mistakes and correct them. Rated reviews- I review your entire concept based on the Lore PQWER system and give it an overall rating. Written reviews- I review your entire concept and tell you what I think of it in prose form. Full reviews- I combine the two previous methods when reviewing your entire concept. Disclaimer: Currently I am only accepting Lore reviews. This is due to my hand suffering from carpal tunnel and I wish to keep the amount of typing to a minimum. |
