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Makeal, The King of Thieves

View Poll Results: Which passive do you like? comment why please!
1/2 gold enemies make in a small radius? 1 100.00%
More gold per kill based on Makeals kill? 0 0%
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FearNECRO ?? Junior Member
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02-09-2013

Name- Makeal

A little about the idea- I originally thought of Makeal as being a prisoner being held by the League. For crimes against the order, Makeal must serve for life on the Fields of Justice. He as stole one item from almost every champion. He was caught and is neutral to either side, and just wants to fight and prove his worth.

Ideal Passive- Master Thieve-- Makeal gains 1/2 the amount of gold enemy champs make whenever they make gold in a very small radius around Makeal
(Note I had an original passive that would award Makeal more gold with the more kills he had, so I believe this new one is more fair)

Q- Sharpen-- Makeal sharpens his daggers. The first sharpen is a quick channel and does more damage next auto attack. The second sharpen takes longer, but deals bonus damage plus a slight slow. After a third channel, Makeal does extra damage,slows, and causes a bleed over time

W-Escape!-- Makeal throws down a smoke ball causing a smoke screen to apper. Makeal is invisible while in the radius and is also invisible a short time after leaving the circle. While in the circle, Makeal deals less damage to foes, but the smoke causes DOT to occur among all enemy champions in the radius

E- Makeal throws a dagger at an a foe, dealing little AD damage. He can reactivate this ability 5 times, each time dealing increasingly more damage each time, each reactivation only take about 1.5 seconds. After the 5 attack, a 20 second (possibly shorter?) cool down starts.

R- Adrenaline Rush-- Makeal gains a massive movement/attack speed boost for 15 seconds. For each enemy he slays he gains an additional 10 secs of Adrenaline Rush


This is the first of many Champs I plan to show you all! Please feel free to comment and criticize, I just ask you try not to crush my dreams to bad!

 
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Xeoxed ?? Junior Member
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02-09-2013

Seems balanced, yet off balance. No real damage doing moves, but mobile. I like it, but it can be better. Nice attempt for your first though!