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Short story: Caitlyn's bad day.

 
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DaWugui ?? Senior Member
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01-17-2011

A quick story before the impending change that makes me very sad:

Caitlyn crouched in the woods, making sure that even her comically oversized hat didn't give her position away. Peering ahead, she saw her prey. She had been tracking him for a while now, but every time, he had evaded Caitlyn's wrath. But this time would be different. No one could evade Caitlyn forever.

Taking a deep breath, Caitlyn quickly loaded, and peered down the sights of her rifle.

Wind condition, good. Target unaware. Steady...steady....fire!

As Caitlyn pulled the trigger, she knew that her aim was true. Time seemed to slow down around her as the deadly bullet flew unimpeded, heading straight for her unlucky target. Caitlyn let out the tiniest of smiles.

Boom. Headshot

The smile swiftly disappeared as her target simply raised his arm, and with a resounding thunk, the best hextech ammo Caitlyn had simply bounced ineffectually off Pantheon's aegis. The artisan of war simply peered in the direction Caitlyn had shot from, and gave a hearty laugh that made the Sheriff of Piltover fume.

"D@MN IT!"

 
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DaWugui ?? Senior Member
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01-20-2011

bump. Is it really that bad? XD

 
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SethCypher ?? Senior Member
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01-20-2011

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Originally Posted by DaWugui View Post
bump. Is it really that bad? XD
It's normal, not everyone has the energy to review really. Out of the 80 or so viewers, I would think some of them enjoyed the read.

That being said however, the piece is terribly short and reviews and comments on it would be limited as well.

 
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waterproofdude ?? Member
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01-20-2011

Not bad, I like the writing style, but I felt as if the response was not characteristic of Pantheon.

 
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SethCypher ?? Senior Member
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01-21-2011

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Originally Posted by waterproofdude View Post
Not bad, I like the writing style, but I felt as if the response was not characteristic of Pantheon.
Oh yeah, now that you mention it, he would seem like more of the type to taunt his opponent by bashing his spear against his shield...or maybe something like "Is that your best?"

 
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CodeX ?? Senior Member
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01-21-2011

You could make a longer story and include this in it.

And lol this reminded me of how annoying Panth's shield can be :P

 
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LuckyKlok ?? Senior Member
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01-21-2011

That gave me a smile. Thank you sir.