Icraig33 review for Zyreph!
Before I start, I just can't hold it back. who are you getting to make the art in your concepts? wait, that's YOU!? you have an insane amount of talent right there! (I have appearance and spell icons that I made for one of my own champs, but imma be honest, they kinda suck).
Innate: so he gains 10% extra MSpeed and can pass through minions, but loses a bit of health every 5s if he doesn't have a speed stack? I looked ahead here and, from what I understand, there is only 2 abilities that gives him speed stacks. I would either remove the HP loss at the cost of a slight nerf on the MSpeed bonus, or make it so that all of his abilities give him a speed stack in one way or another (except for W, since it removes the stacks). I personally find that, since he will be getting and losing stacks constantly, having to manage the HP loss from this innate is needlessly excessive.
Q: It seems good. I find the ult-coolcown reduction portion of this spell kinda random, but I can live with it. Mana costs and cooldowns are fine.
W: so... wait, the bonus damage caps at 3 stacks worth? let's say you have 5 stacks and use this ability. Does it mean it will only deal 39 bonus true damage as opposed to 65? AND it removes all speed stacks? if it's the way I understand it, it should only remove as much speed stacks as it's technically using (as in removes 3 stacks max). Quick question: is the AD scaling on this ability (and for the rest of the abilities in general) scale with bonus AD or total AD? cooldowns and mana costs are fine.
E: I actually understand this spell very clearly. My main question is: how long does the DoT last? is it as long as the trail's duration, or does it have an independent duration? other than that, it seems good.
R: seems good. My only problem is the cooldown, as it should be higher. the naturally low cooldown, plus the cooldown reduction from his Q, pretty much means that he will be having this spell ready all the dang time. I think you should do something about that.
Overall, I really like him and I think thathe's really close to being in "the one" spot that I think all champs strive for.