Alright, here's my e-mail.
soulweaver64@gmail.com
Yes, it is just a coincedence that my e-mail and champ idea are the same...don't comment. Anyways, before you send me the official document, I'd like to bring up a couple things.
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A medium-sized man, with golden, large eyes, very menacing but relatively kindly, as well. Across his nose, which is close to his head but relatively long, there is a pale, pink scar. His skin is bleached, as is his hair; I'm talking full-on, everything white bleached. His hair is spiky and longish, coming down to his chin in the front, but sticking up a good three or so inches above his head. He wears a leather jacket, long enough to reach the back of his knees, which extends down to his feet with ace-of-spades type coattails, about five of them. Similar to Talon's cape, except it's all one piece. He wears baggy pants and a baggy black shirt, along with well-worn boots. Around his hands, he wears long gauntlets, up to his elbow, that also end in the ace-of-spades shape. Near the actual hands, there are two violet gems, which have wisps of energy floating around them. These are the source of his power. When he is melee, they have wicked energy blades formed around them, while when he is ranged, there is nothing around them, but his palms have violet flame spheres floating around them. (Oh, forgot that he has a small goatee, as well.)
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This is the official description of my character. So, let us see how you translated him.
-Golden Eyes. Good start.
-White, spiky hair. Well done on that.
-Scar across the nose. Good attention to detail.
-Rockin' the goatee.
-Has the long coat...but it isn't long enough, and doesn't have quite the coattails I was thinking of. Do you think you can change that?
-No gauntlets at all. I'm sorry, but this is a major discrepancy. I'm going to have to ask you to add the gauntlets, although you did a good job on the crystals. I can see how you mistranslated, though. I said 'near the hands' in his description, with 'wisps of energy.' You fit that description perfectly, but...you left out this important part:
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Around his hands, he wears long gauntlets, up to his elbow, that also end in the ace-of-spades shape
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I'd like for you to add those, sorry.
-I appear to have forgotten to elaborate on his torso and pants, haven't I? No matter. He wears leather pants, over black boots, with the same ace-of-spades design that his coat has. His shirt is just simple black cloth. Think you can do that?
It'd be great if you could pull that off for me. Thanks for doing this art!
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