Hey guys,

I just had an awesome idea that I had to make a champ of >.< Lemme know what you guys think!

Mirage, the pirate of the East
Melee, Carry

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Come on... no replies?

Basically this is Shaco and attack speed. Sorry I dont like this idea that much :/

Love the art. The abilities could use some work. He seems...a little TOO strong. 40% attack speed from his W and 50 from his passive seems like overkill. And for a champion named, Mirage, he doesn't seem very deceptive. If I understand the abilities correctly, the mirages he summons are just for show. It'd be interesting if he used them like a pet similar to Shaco or LeBlanc (which is probably what you had originally). I'm just not sure how you'd make it unique compared to those two. Maybe making the mirage simply copy your movement and attacks automatically (doing no damage but confusing the enemy, hence mirage)

You are right, 40 from w and 50 from passive DOES seem way overkill in retrospect. I will change his passive but my thinking was Mirage is a pirate who uses dual swords and is very agile, hence the attack speed. The numbers were just for show that could be adjusted later.

My original idea had lots of potions and illusions and stuff but someone said it looked like a copy of Shaco so I changed it >.< I think you are also right on that part, I'll have to change his ultimate to something more befitting his lore. (Though the current ultimate is not too far off since hes also a master alchemist through the recipes left behind by his ancestors).

Edit: Currently, two of his abilities summon a mirage. His Q summons a mirage that attacks for damage and vanishes after the attack. His teleport also summons a mirage but it does not damage (useful for deceiving the enemy and getting away. I also wanted to weave potions in his abilities because his main skill is alchemy. (He uses potions to summon these mirages).

Edit #2: Yes you are right, his original ultimate was that he summoned 2 illusions that could be controlled like a pet and dealt damage for 15 seconds scaling with Mirage's AD.

Lemme know what you think if I should still change some of his abilities to make it more deceptive, etc! Any suggestions / input / critique is welcome!

The ultimate sounds like a ton of fun if you could somehow control BOTH illusions. He'd be an even better Juker than LeBlanc, with a very high skill cap. Also updated my concept a bit.

Passive: If I understand well, that's like Master Yi's passive? Or more liek Leblanc's passive? Anyways, it's simple and it works.

Q: That's your main ability? Umm. How long does the clone last and the is the damage you listed the damage that the clone does on each autoattack? If it's every autoattack, that's OP lol. You deal 200% of your AD xDD. Can your clone crit? Apply on-hit effects? (Oh god). Etc.

W: Well that's very very simple lol. Raise the numbers! They are weak! How long does the buff last?

E: That's good. Simple too ._. It makes me think of Wukong's clone but hey, whatever, we can have similar abilities in the league.

R: Enemies autoattacking themselves is a big no unless they deal no damage to each other. Because otherwise, they could kill each other lol. That's just wrong.

R: That would be just like your Q but with a stun...

Please create an unique ultimate! I have faith in yo! Your champion is incredibly simple, to a point where he's almost boring xD. Remember also that you shouldn't make too many clones, otherwise it's just confusing for everyone and not so fun.