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[Champion Suggestion] Kerebos, The Claw of Cerberus

View Poll Results: Would you like to see Kerebos as a new champion?
Yes 39 73.58%
Yup, great concept but the She needs some change before(posted the change to make) 10 18.87%
Nope, (posted the reason why) 4 7.55%
Voters: 53. You may not vote on this poll

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05-18-2011

Kerebos, The Claw of Cerberus (Made by ThePandara and HighXander, Art concept made by ThePandara) And dont forget to let a +1

Note: you can see change log and idea in 2 of the post below.


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Lore: When she was young, she was known as Mina, an ordinary child without any special power. One day, her normal and peaceful life was crushed in an instant. A terrible sounds emerge from the outside of her house. Swarmed by curiosity, Mina ran outside to know what was happening. She just had one feet outside the house, the only thing she had time to see was a great mix of purpul and white light and her parents covering her in their arms. A few secondes later, covered in burned limbs, Mina saw before fainting two winged shadows fighting like if they were consumed by rage. When she recovered from her fainting, she was standing in front of a giant gate and a monstrous monster, Cerberus the guardian of the underworld. The three-heads dog looked into Mina's eye like if he was searching something inside her soul.

"You...you aren't dead little girl," it said. "You do not belong here with the dead."

Mina stood still without saying a single word. Her head lowered, trying to hide the tears flowing on her face...her parents were dead protecting her. Mina's hearth start beating with anger toward those two shadows from her last memory on Runeterra that killed her beloved parents.

"Anger won't do you any good little girl," muttered the Cerberus. "Those who raised you have reached the underworld, the resting place."

The guardian looked at the girl standing in front of him, he started to feel something he never felt before, pity. He could also see a potential in her that would serve their purpose. It started to move toward Mina, the earth shaking with each step of the beast. Its nose almost touching Mina's face.

"You seek justice, like i do little girl. But I can't leave this sanctuary, unlike you."

"Justice." She said. She raised her head, revealing her eyes once again. Those blue eyes that were filled with purity are now colored by a deep red, seeking vengence and justice.

"Teach me, show me how to fight!" She screamed while her tears were flowing harder on her child's face. " Teach me how to be strong and i shall show them the real meaning of justice!"

First, the Cerberus was disturbed by her new attitude,afterward, what was ressembling to a smile appeared on the Cerberus revealing his sharp teeth. He looked somewhere else, searching in is own memories. He looked back to Mina's.

"Than I shall teach you how to feel the souls, but in exchange you shall take care of those necromancers from a place called Noxius." Taking a big breath to settle his rage. "Those wreached mortals bring back the death from the underworld and bind them to their own will. I cannot endure this immorality any longuer." From this day, Mina called the beast *father*

Days, months and years past since Mina reached the underworld gate. During all these days, she learned how to respect the souls, how to call upon their strenght and how to fight. During the time she past in the underworld, dark red wings started to grow from her back and she finally grew into a woman. The day as finally came, the one were she shall return to her ancient world and seek those who transgress the will of the dead and those who killed her parents.

"Here, take this," muttered the Cerberus while he was giving something to Mina,"those are the armor and claws forged by the souls of the underworld and myself."The Cerberus said loudly,"Since i was born, your people called me with many names, one of them was Kerberos. Your name is too weak, you shall be know as Kerebos from this day."

Kerebos walked to the portal linking the two world, steped in. She reappeared on a field with a burned house, her house. A presence came from behind her. Wearing a shining armor, this spectacular being coming from the sky landed peacefully on the ground, looking directly to Kerebos.

"I've been waiting for you since many years now, Mina." She said quietly,"my name is Kayle and i've come here to ask you to join the League of Legends. This way, you could help me bring justice upon my fallen sister that is the reason of your beloved parents death.

Kerebos look directly to this "so called" angel with her deep red eyes.

"Mina exist no more, its Kerebos now and I shall join this League of Legends," she paused,"but the only justice i will bring it isn't yours, but the only and real one...the justice of the grave!
Champion stats:
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Damage 55(+3.2 / per level)
Health 440(+88 / per level)
Soul Bar 100(+0 / per level)
Move Speed 300
Armor 17(+3.6 / per level)
Spell Block 30(+1.25 / per level)
Health Regen 1.4(+0.14/ per level)
Soul Regen 5(+0 / per level)
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Note: Soul remnants is her energy bar. It's exactly like the mana bar for Shen, Kennen and akali. Exept, you cut it in half so the max is 100 and the regen is 5 + the regeneration she gets from dying minons or champions on the battlefield.(take a look to her innate to understand)
Skills:

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Passive: Soul Keeper - Kerebos heavy armor is made by the one and only keeper of the underworld, the Cerberus. Her armor is imbued with convicted souls attracting the souls from the battlefield.
-If a minions die near Kerebos, she regain 5 soul remnants.
-if an enemy champions die near Kerebos, her soul bar regain 25 soul remnants.
-When Kerebos kills an enemy minions or champions, she store a soul for Justice of the grave. (all souls are lost if she dies)
-Every 7secondes, Kerebos gather 1 soul for Justice of the grave

Q: Cerberus fang - Kerebos use her chain to perform a mid range attack. Dealing 30/45/60/75/90 (+) physical damage. If a unit gets hit by cerberus fang, he will suffer from soul bleeding making him vulnerable to the next cerberus fang for the next 10secondes (Skill shot) Also apply item's effect like frozen mallet.

-If you hit a target under the effect of soul bleeding with Cerberus fang, it will deal 25% more damage.

8/7/6/5/4secondes cooldown (cost 15 souls)

W: Soul grip - Souls are surrounding Kerebos creating a barrier against magic giving 10/15/20/25/30 MR aura.
Active: Kerebos open a rift under an enemy. A demonic hand comes out and grab the enemy to crush him. Holding the enemy for 1/1.25/1.5/1.75/2secondes, the demonic hand also crush the target for 75/90/130/170/210 magic damage (+0.4 per/ap)

20/18/16/14/12 secondes cooldown (cost 35 souls)

E: Tortured Soul - Kerebos summon an enchained tortured soul from the underworld in a specified zone. After a short delay, the tortured soul throw his chains to every enemies still in the zone, dealing 70/100/140/190/230 (+0.7 per/ap)physical damage and bring the enemies back to the soul. (Skill shot)

14/13/12/11/10 secondes cooldown (cost 25souls)

R: Justice of the grave - Kerebos unleash all the souls stored in her armor. The souls will go into frenzy and attack any enemies they see in a radius around Kerebos. She can only store a certain number of soul within her armor. The souls will attack random target around a certain radius of Kerebos.

level 1:
Max: 4 souls : 35 (+10% of kerebos ad from items)
level 2:
Max: 7 souls : 45 (+10% of kerebos ad from items)
level 3:
Max: 10 souls : 60(+10% of kerebos ad from items)
All physical damage

Those souls are show as a stack like Akali Shadow dance
Each souls attack heal kerebos for 10% of the damage done
Souls doesn't attack towers
Last 15secondes

120/105/90 secondes cooldown (no cost)
Tips:

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Kerebos is an AD dps/tank. She is mostly made to keep enemies champions away from range dps. Her ult gives her a way to tank since the souls are healing her while doing damage.

If you are having problem to get people in Tortured soul, use Soul Grip to at least get one enemy in it.

Her Q is mainly a Nuke attack, Its a skillshot with mid range like Mundo's Cleaver.

Be carefull with her R because it is easy to gather souls, but also easy to lose all of them making her ult useless. This ultimate doesn't do massive damage if you fight around a lot of enemies (creep, minions, champions) but still gives a good life regeneration from the damage dealt. Her ult also combine really nice with all her other skill in a 1v1 where the opponents is stronger than you. With Tortured Soul and Soul Grip you can keep your enemy at distance while striking from far with Cerberus Fang and Justice of the grave. She can also use Justice of the grave while escaping to damage enemy and make them back.
Due to her heavy armor, Kerebos is the slowest champion and she doesn't have any escape ability making her vulnerable to any Slow and snare attack
Recommended items

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Tank build: (oudated...sry, ask riot to stop changing their items! xD)

Doran's shield (starting item)
Mercury's boot
Warmog's armor
Force of Nature
Spirit visag
Atma's impaler
Guardian angel
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Dps build: (oudated...sry, ask riot to stop changing their items! xD)

Doran's shield (starting item)
Boots of swiftness
Frozen mallet
Phantom dancer
Last whisper
Youmuu's ghostblade
Stark's fervor
While making the build for this Champion, you gotta keep it mind that she got slooooooowww movement and she needs items to boost her speed.

Sentences:

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Mouvement click:
-Death means nothing!
-Wings doesn't mean i know how to fly.
-Phreak? who are you calling a freak!

Joke:
-My father is better than yours!
-Why? because he got 3 heads and a voracious appetite

Taunt:
-I'll make you feel all the pain of the fallen souls!

Upon death:
-The doors are opening...for me now...father...

Champion select:
-Dont be afraid, i won't bite you.
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All comments and suggestion would be really appreciated. I'm leaving a poll to see what you think about this sexy little demonic girl . But if you vote, you gotta leave a comment about what you love or what you think that needs to be change about her. Thx for taking a look and i am sure you want an armored girl joining the League of Legends
Others champions creation:
Zyshin & Rin, The Malevolent Imps
Rok'Mar, The League hunter
Kimimari, The Pandara

 
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NickPham ?? Senior Member
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05-18-2011

Solid, not a fan of kill based resource systems, but you carried it out well.

As for skills everything is fine except for your W. This is a utility skill, and is satisfying to level and have regardless of stat scaling. It should therefore have AP scaling. This argument is made very well by Phreak somewhere in GGD. This also makes it slightly more worthwhile for someone to buy Will of the Ancients on your team.

If you appreciate being reviewed, please remember to return the favor .
http://www.leagueoflegends.com/board...d.php?t=757559
My very first champ creation.

 
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ThePandara ?? Senior Member
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05-18-2011

I present you Kerebos, the claw of cerberus. Some might already seen her already in the "wrong forum". I'm looking foward for some good advice or simply nice feedback

Here is the log of what have been change so far

changes 2011-05-19 10:50

Passive: When an enemy champions die, Kerebos regain half of her Soul Bar.
R- Souls doesnt attack towers
W- Soul grip been change from AD to AP scaling and damage, Soul cost went from 40 to 35
E- Tortured souls: Scaling change from AD to AP, Soul cost went from 30 to 25
Q- Cerberus Fang: Soul cost went from 20 to 15

changes 2011-05-19 16:51

Passive- Soul Keeper: Every 7secondes, Kerebos gather 1 soul for Justice of the grave

Changes 2011-05-20 11:14

Armor per level reduce to 3.6 from 4

Changes 2011-05-21 00:18

R- Justice of the grave: Soul damage gain from item are now reduce to 30/35/40% from 60/60/60%
Sentences added

Changes 2011-05-21 11:28

Added Kyshin & Rin link

Changes 2011-05-22 14:06

New concept art for Kerebos is out!

Changes 2011-06-05 10:42

- Mouvement speed went to 300 from 290
- Soul Bar regeneration from dying enemy champ went to 25 from 50

Changes 2012/06/22

- Justice of the grave: souls dmg bonus from items went from 30/35/40% to a fix 10%

 
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ThePandara ?? Senior Member
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05-18-2011

Here you can see any personnal reflexion and incoming work

I'm thinking about changing her ultimate a little bit,
1- Giving her another minions, Fallen Souls ( souls gathered from dead enemies champions) and changing Souls for Lesser Souls
2- Lowering the number of souls and damage
3- Fallen souls are like Greater souls. Having extra damage.

or

Ultimate also gives a passive: for every souls stored, she gains X extra damage (Nevermore ability from Dota for those who remember this badass carry)

For her passive:
When kerebos kills or get assist on an enemy champion, she stack 1 Fallen soul

Tips, once she use her ultimate, all stored souls goes away

 
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Aftord ?? Senior Member
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05-19-2011

Mmmh, if what you tried to achieve is making a tanky dps, I think you went a bit over too far with all her skills scaling with AD. Another thing is that her Q seems a bit off. Looks like it'd do lots of damage, then again, it costs 1/5 of your soul meter, so using it more than twice doesn't seem like a viable option. Kinda reminds me of Jarvan... Altogether, it looks cool and it'd be nice to see her around.

 
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Ash189 ?? Junior Member
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05-19-2011

I really like this concept i think it could be a very good champion her ulti seems like late game it could make her invincible though but i will definately say yes to the poll

 
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H2O Buffalo ?? Senior Member
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05-19-2011

Fairly balanced, except for one thing....If this champ dies ONCE they are now entirely useless. (not really) but there needs to be a "time" method of filling the soul bar. Just needs some way to NOT be rendered useless by a single death.

 
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05-19-2011

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Originally Posted by Water ****alo View Post
Fairly balanced, except for one thing....If this champ dies ONCE they are now entirely useless. (not really) but there needs to be a "time" method of filling the soul bar. Just needs some way to NOT be rendered useless by a single death.
aight, ty i guess ill put a timer with how she Stack souls for her ult like i said on a previous post

 
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H2O Buffalo ?? Senior Member
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05-19-2011

Sorry almost forgot my shameless self promotion.
http://www.leagueoflegends.com/board...06#post9009506

 
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DarkfirePheonix ?? Senior Member
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05-19-2011

Absolutely solid, so little comlplaints, I would go detailed but I find no point, you know how solid it is, 9/10 I only found one flaw, and this one is preference based only, but I'm not into the stored resource system, especialy kill based ones, besides that really fun looking and interesting champ.
I commented on yours now check out the rest of mine http://www.leagueoflegends.com/board...light=darkfire

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